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Waiting / Any
Completed May 28th, 2017
Your main character is waiting for something/someone. What are they waiting for? Are they anxious or calm? Don't reveal what they were waiting for until the very end of your short!

"Having more backstory about the relationship with the father might have helped the tone make sense. Was the main character waiting to meet his father that he rarely sees or just pick him up? The ending was really abrupt as well. Nice work guys!"

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Orlando, FL
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Description: "a man waits for his dad to show up, whom he hasn't seen in years"

Submitted: April 25th, 2017

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Video "Waiting"

by NewBreedFilms

Genre: Any

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Waiting

by NewBreedFilms

A man is impatiently waiting on a park bench

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