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Bagel Haiku / Haiku
Completed May 3rd, 2015
Make a video haiku that has a bagel in it...A video haiku is a 3 shot film. 1st shot is 5 sec, next shot is 7 sec, final shot is 5 seconds. SEE EXAMPLES HERE: http://bit.ly/s34Fmc

"The last shot was great, would have been better with a lot more bagels though. Having a moving shot as you first or second shot would have made the overall film more interesting. Looks like you had access to a school so I'm sure you could have picked places that were more interesting to see then the hallway. Great..." read more

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Orlando, FL
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Description: "The young protagonist goes through internal struggles. His only salvation is the doughy goodness known to many as a bagel."

Submitted: April 17th, 2015

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Video "Gluten Freedom"

by Film Club

Genre: Haiku

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Film Club32
One Trick Pony27
Anti-Productive Productions19

Gluten Freedom

by Film Club

Stuffed in that cupboard. Alone, forgotten, and stale. Time to be set Free.

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