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Rogue Shoe / Haiku
Completed September 18th, 2017
Tell the story of the 'one lost shoe' that sits on the side of the road in video haiku form. How did it get there? Why would someone leave just one shoe?!?! Haiku example: http://bit.ly/s34Fmc

"I like the idea of the joke, but the last shot doesn't sell it. Your actor should have been doing something to make like the truck was moving in the previous shot. Great idea though!"

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Description: "Some shoes next to a truck, and pants, and shirts, and the trucks bouncing... Hmmmm..."

Submitted: August 31st, 2017

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Video "(Shoe) String Theory"

by DunceCapKid

Genre: Haiku

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(Shoe) String Theory

by DunceCapKid

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